DelboyDylan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BadGuys2:AppeasingTheGods]

You my man, are a legend!!!

As soon as I saw this on the "50 Most Recent" list I got very excited. I knew you were going to produce a masterpiece and you didn't let me down.

The comedy is yet again perfect and had me in stitches. You have also improved in various areas. Firstly the animation is longer. Even though this doesn't really matter, it means I can enjoy even more of your funnies in one sitting. Secondly, you have improved artistically, your main characters now have proper arms now rather than lines.

Another thing to note is you now have background music/beat, which helps the animation to flow better, nice one! =D

Also you have added an option to disable the subtitles. This is a good idea as it means people can choose to enjoy the fullness of your graphical skills without the words getting in the way.

Awesome dialogue I enjoyed were:

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"Wait it might be booby-trapped."
"That's OK. I love boobies."
"Good Point."

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"Hey, can we take some giant carrots with us?"
"What the shit kind of question is that? Hell yes, you take the carrots!"

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"Ya, get Stephan to chase them."
"Stephan has no LEGS!"
"I don't care. He is fucking fast"

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Quite simply comedy gold! I think it's safe to say I will be voting for this submission in the monthly voting for October. Also I have upgraded you to my favourite authors list. I look forward to the next one!

ChrisNosal responds:

Thank you very much. I can use all the help I can get in those monthly awards.

[Earth Battle]

Interesting, but needs more

It's a nice little animation which reminds me of the game "Freespace". However, it is a bit short and seems very rushed at the end.

I think you could have done better with the graphics, they seemed a little sketchy.

Overall quite nice, but needs alot more work.

[BadGuys]

"Ale and whores for everyone! Huzzah!" Genius!

This was short but I couldn't care less, it had me splitting my sides with laughter, seriously, I had to go to A & E!

I don't know what made you come up with the dialogue, but it was fantastic, the comedy timing was perfect!

The graphics were great, it is definitely a style I would like to see more of from you.

You might want to get some voice actors to help you with some of the dialogue, but I don't know if the comedy perfection would remain intact if you did.

The only problem I have with this submission in any way shape or form is the mindless slaughter of Sven, I liked Sven, Sven was cool, asshole! >:-(

Other than that it was an excellent piece of flash and I look forward to more. You get a very deserved thumbs up!

P.S. I voted this submission #1 in the monthly voting, that's how good I think it is!

ChrisNosal responds:

Thanks, I appreciate that vote a lot.

Heh, maybe Sven can make a comeback someday.

[Pallid Fingers]

This is the best salad fingers parody ever!

When I first saw the title of this submission I thought "Shit, yet another lame salad fingers parody". Then when I started watching it I thought it was going to be nothing to do with salad fingers at all and was just going to be some average flash, but I was wrong. As the stroy prgressed I grew to realise that this submission was comedy genius at work and a top notch parody of David Firth's creation.

The actual art work isn't great, and you could have probably spent more time on it. However, the genius behind the story makes up for that big time.

I simply loved the ending and now have "Boomkats - The Wrekoning" on my playlist!

I am really looking forward to Pallid Fingers 2 and can't wait to see what randomness you come up with next.

[Living Dead Girl (the one]

A good style, but needs improving

I liked this, the animation style is pretty cool and the music is awesome. However, I do have some problems with it.

1) The quality of the drawing needs to be improved.
2) More detail in the animation would be nice.
3) You don't have any credits or anything.
4) It loops without stopping the music track, hence when you play it again you have the music playing twice.

If you improve using my pointers you will be well on the way to submitting an awesome animation.

Waterspirit responds:

well I... don't know how to stop the music... I'm having problems but ... that's alright cause I might be going on with this trailer anyways.... so it's more improved and more fighting and stuff thanks for the points

[Photosynthesis]

As an educational movie it is top of the line

I can tell you did alot of research for this, I actually learnt something. This is not something that occurs often when visiting Newgrounds.

The animation is good and helps to visually explain the science. Overall however the animation isn't very advanced, but in my opinion it doesn't need to be.

The narration is a bit strange, it keeps going from a quiet voice that sounds like it is far away to a louder voice that is much more clear.

Also the whole movie could have been more interesting and what was with the smurfs?

Very good as an educational animation, but there is plenty of room for improvement.

[Red Dwarf Intro]

Alot better, well done

I helped your first trailer pass judgement and was very impressed. The new improved one is so much better.

I'm a big fan of red dwarf and it looks like you are going to do it justice, well done.

The graphics are awesome and capture the look of the original characters while giving it a wonderful cartoony charm. :-)

P.S. To have your previous trailer deleted you need to rename it "deleteUS01" (without the quotation marks). After this is done Wade Fulp will delete it when he next looks for submissons named using that format.

UncleStevie responds:

Hey I didn't know that! Thanks for telling me. I hope I do it justice ;)

Oh, and thanks for getting my other one past judgement!

[Noob Bashing Is Fun]

Made me laugh...

...because it is very true. Why can't people be more helpful. I help the new people to NG, answer their questions and give them advice. It's not difficult!

Very nicely put across, I applaud you.

However I have one problem with this submission, you did not compress your audio, hence the file size was much larger than it needed to be.

Indigno-Studios responds:

meh, I knew that even without compressed audio it wouldn't go over file limit, so I didn't bother.

[!!Crazy Tutorial 2!!]

Useful

For anyone that would like to learn these flash techniques, this is very useful and informative. However, for someone who is telling other people how to use flash, you made the biggest mistake yourself, you didn't compress your audio!!!

[< Lines >]

A bit better than most stick movies

It was OK, it has been done to death though. Also I have a suspicion you didn't compress your audio, this is extremely important if you want a half decent score. There are instructions on how to do this on the site.

taranramshaw responds:

ok